Wednesday, March 4, 2009

What I want to be

After high school, I want to go to college and get a degree in business. I want to do this because I want to further my education. I have always wanted to go into business because I like it more than any other subject. I want to go to college to get out of Roosevelt for a while.
After I get my business degree, I will probably work at a bank or some place like that, where I can use my education. In order to achieve this goal, I will have to get good grades in high school right now so I can go to college.

3 comments:

  1. You might want to take away the last sentence because it is a little repetitive.

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  2. I agree with Syd. Just make sure you don't repeat yourself too much. You can take out some of the "I wants" to.

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  3. It sounds like a good goal. I hope you achieve it with honors.

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